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Post by Dustin on Apr 10, 2015 15:39:17 GMT -6
I loved Bobcat's segment with the fans counting those punches! Ratchet's win is awesome, and the match sequence rocked! I'd love if she was my first champ! Lastly, glad to see The Messenger stepping up... but Pirate wins overall. Does he get, no pun intended, the booty?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 18:20:46 GMT -6
Remarkable card Eliath. Ratchet will make an interesting champion. It will be interesting to see how the story unfolds.
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Post by Eliath on Apr 10, 2015 20:22:13 GMT -6
I loved Bobcat's segment with the fans counting those punches! Ratchet's win is awesome, and the match sequence rocked! I'd love if she was my first champ! Lastly, glad to see The Messenger stepping up... but Pirate wins overall. Does he get, no pun intended, the booty? I so wanted that fight to go 5 rounds so I could test out my rounds house rule, but the result was amazing. I told Eric that Ratchet was going to win my title before she did it - I just had a feeling with how her character played for me. Finally Messenger showed some signs of life, but as you said, Pirate got the booty - WIN! Couldn't pass up the opportunity to develop these great characters. Thanks for the reply!
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Post by Eliath on Apr 10, 2015 20:34:49 GMT -6
I really liked the crowd counting every SUPERMAN PUNCH by Bobcat Jack and Jack winning is killer, the same for Ratchet and her title victory... Thank you sir for your reply. The crowd counting every punch was my favorite moment as well, with Ratchet's one punch KO in a close second.
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Post by Eliath on Apr 10, 2015 20:35:51 GMT -6
Remarkable card Eliath. Ratchet will make an interesting champion. It will be interesting to see how the story unfolds. Thank you sir for your response. I agree that Ratchet will make an interesting champion - lots of storylines can build from that. Speaking of...it is time for the story to begin. This is going to be fun...
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Post by Eliath on Apr 10, 2015 22:57:58 GMT -6
The story begins...
In the shadows outside Box Office Arena, a clandestine meeting takes place.
Dealer: "Hey, I've got what you need right here, but it cost more than expected."
Vincitor: "It doesn't matter. I have a big fight coming up and I'm not going to loose again."
Dealer: "It's 1500."
Vincitor: "What?! You said it would be 500!"
Dealer: "Hey, price of doing business."
Vincitor: "I won't have that much until after my next fight."
Dealer: "So, I'll see you then." He turns to leave.
Vincitor: "WAIT! Can you give me half now, and the rest after my fight?"
Dealer: "Listen, I don't usually do this, but if you will commit to five more of these then I will front you these and you can pay me after your next fight."
Vincitor: "Deal!" The dealer hands over a vile of blue liquid.
Dealer: "I don't have to tell you that you don't know me if you get caught with that, right?"
Vincitor: "I've never seen you before in my life."
Dealer: "Outstanding. I'll see you next week then. Good luck."
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Post by cman on Apr 10, 2015 23:01:42 GMT -6
Awesome win for Ratchet! I loved it, Wrist Rocket and Khan is done! Great card across the board too.
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Post by Eliath on Apr 10, 2015 23:02:09 GMT -6
Awesome win for Ratchet! I loved it, Wrist Rocket and Khan is done! Great card across the board too. Thank you sir!
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Post by Dustin on Apr 10, 2015 23:05:42 GMT -6
Solid story going forth. I have a feeling Vincitor is going to get caught... just like A-Rod. Maybe it's not what we expect? We'll have to keep reading. But, everyone pay attention, this is how you bring these characters to life.
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Post by Eliath on Apr 10, 2015 23:11:01 GMT -6
The real question here, is Vincitor self-destructive and seeking to enhance his performance, or simply destructive, seeking to inhibit someone else's?
I love story telling.
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Post by kgrroth on Apr 14, 2015 7:52:01 GMT -6
Man, good stuff!!
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Post by The Konishoner on Apr 14, 2015 9:22:07 GMT -6
Nice way to play on Vincitor losing streak. Either way, I'm interested in seeing how things develop.
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Post by Eliath on Apr 14, 2015 22:39:12 GMT -6
Box Office Arena Press Conference
Hype MacLeod stands behind a podium. To his left sits the Intergalactic Champion Ratchet, with her belt draped over her shoulder. To his right sits the man-beast Squatch.
Hype MacLeod: "Ladies and gentlemen, thank you very much for joining us today. The I.F.C. is proud to congratulate our inaugural champion Ratchet on her achievement, and announce that her first title defense will be against Squatch at our first pay-per-view ASCENSION next week.
Reporter: "How did you decide on Squatch for Ratchet's next opponent?"
Hype MacLeod: "A title shot was included in part of his initial contract agreement."
Reporter: "Ratchet, how do you feel about facing Squatch next week?"
Ratchet: "Listen sugar, I've already shown these boys what I'm made of. I just hope it takes me more than one punch to finish this one."
Squatch laughs aloud.
Reporter: "Squatch, any comment in response?"
Squatch: "She will break like glass, you will see."
This time Ratchet laughs aloud.
Ratchet: "Bless his heart, he's as dumb as a sack of rocks. I'll pray for you boy."
Squatch roars to his feet and starts towards Ratchet.
Squatch: "YOU WILL REFER TO ME AS SQUATCH, NOT BOY!"
Ratchet: "How nice for you sugar."
Squatch tries to press past Hype MacLeod, but security is there to stop him.
Ratchet: "You know, I never would've thought to color my hair white like that. You're so creative. Let him go boys, let me knock him out right here."
Squatch: "I WILL DESTROY YOU WRETCH!"
Ratchet: "I think I made him mad."
Ratchet gets to her feet, winks at the crowd, and blows Squatch a kiss before leaving the stage.
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Post by Eliath on Apr 14, 2015 22:51:50 GMT -6
In the outskirts of the Fifth Vector, Connor and Alexander watch...
Alexander: "Why exactly are we to watch this Vector? It has lain dormant for more than a decade."
Connor: "Nick wants to be sure it stays that way, or have ample notification that things have changed."
The scrape of a footfall grabs both men's attention immediately, and both move to investigate...
Alexander: "There hasn't been any movement in this Vector since our arrival, what is going on?"
Connor kneels to examine the ground and indicates the passing of something...
Connor: "Something moved through here not long ago, the tracks circle around us, then disappear."
Alexander: "I sensed nothing. I sense nothing now."
Connor: "Nor do I, but who can tell with denizens of this Vector?"
Alexander: "Should we report this?"
Connor: "Let's investigate further first."
In the shadows around the brothers, six denizens of the Fifth Vector slowly close the circle on them...
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2015 23:25:53 GMT -6
Nice work on the story and press conference. The piece about Vector 5 is pretty cool. Definitely love it.
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