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Post by Dustin on Sept 8, 2015 21:15:23 GMT -6
So, I REALLY like the Soulless angle and character(s).
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Post by pikemojo on Sept 8, 2015 21:40:31 GMT -6
You've got some really interesting angles going here. I like the write ups a lot. Really entertaining read!
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Post by Eliath on Sept 9, 2015 7:56:43 GMT -6
You've got some really interesting angles going here. I like the write ups a lot. Really entertaining read! Thank you sir! It is great to have another reader along for the ride. Feel free to share your opinion about anything going on - if you see someone that you think should have a push - say so! I love getting feedback on what I'm doing. It is part of the fun for me! Thank you again for taking the time to read and respond!
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Post by Eliath on Sept 9, 2015 7:58:53 GMT -6
So, I REALLY like the Soulless angle and character(s). Essentially, the Soulless equate to "minions" - they are not meant to have personality or will of their own, only to "slow down" the heroes. I never meant them to be a challenge. The thing is, someone or something is stirring up Vector Five - any ideas on who or what it might be and why it might be happening? MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Post by Eliath on Sept 12, 2015 18:15:56 GMT -6
#007 - REVELATIONPRELIMINARIES
PARTY PIRATE def. SQUATCH with PARTY PUNCH:: Party Pirate knocked Squatch the fuck out with PARTY PUNCH! NOTES: It was great opening the night with a one-punch knockout. Party Pirate exclaimed “Let the after party begin!” TIKI BOOM def. TICK TOCK with Fast Forward:: Tiki Boom hit Fast Forward & Tick Tock went down as if he was shot. NOTES: Another one-punch knockout – AMAZING! BOBCAT JACK def. VINCITOR with SUPERMAN PUNCH (*****):: This was an incredible fight! Vincitor (7 POP escapes) hit Jack (8 POP escapes) with everything in his arsenal, but visibly weakened the longer the fight went on and Jack capitalized after a scramble with a SUPERMAN PUNCH for the win. NOTES: This fight was easily, Fight of the Night. The question is what happened to Vincitor over the course of the fight that weakened him to such an extent. DEATH STAR def. EL PIKADOR with DEATH MARCH:: Pikador survived the initial Fast Forward, but went down under the DEATH MARCH that followed. NOTES: Death Star tried to reclaim El Pikador with a giant sized Pokeball, but was not successful. MAIN CARDYOKO-OHNO def. WARHAWK with BONZAI SPLASH:: This fight lasted two moves – Belly to Belly Slam, followed by BONZAI SPLASH. NOTES: This fight continued a night of less than one-minute finishes. Incredible! KEN PO def. HONEST ABE with RYUKEN
:: Ken survived Fast Forward and the follow up LINCOLN LOCK to deliver RYUKEN out of nowhere for the win. NOTES: Abe looked dominant, but Ken caught him flush and it was over. This was another sub one-minute finish. KRUSHER KHAN def. RABBID with SOVIET SICKLE:: Rabbid roared across the cage on the attack, but Khan was ready with the SOVIET SICKLE to claim victory. NOTES: Not to alter the established timing of finishes – another finish in under a minute. #1 CONETENDER FIGHTROCKY def. PUNK A.D. with SUPER COMBO KO:: Both men evaded big shots, but Rocky landed the first telling blow with SUPER COMBO KO to win without being hit. NOTES: Rocky secured a fight for the INTERGALACTIC TITLE on the next card. MAIN EVENT INTERGALACTIC TITLE FIGHTHype MacLeod in the cage for introductions..."It is time for the Main Event of the evening." "Five rounds for the I.F.C. Intergalactic Title." " Introducing first, fighting out the red corner; he stands 6'3" tall, and weighed in at 285 lbs. fighting out of The Second Realm, here he is – THE MESSENGER! "His opponent, fighting out of the blue corner; she stands 5'8" tall, and weighed in at 170 lbs. fighting out of The Borderlands, here she is, the reigning, defending, undisputed champion of the galaxy, the fiery one-punch knockout queen - RATCHET! ROUND 1 - FIGHT!
:: Ratchet exploded across the ring on the attack, but Messenger evaded the blow and landed LAST RITES to claim the title. THE MESSENGER def. RATCHET © with LAST RITES (ROUND 1)WINNER AND NEW CHAMPION – THE MESSENGER!
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Post by Dustin on Sept 12, 2015 18:43:04 GMT -6
I never thought I'd see the Lady of the Wrist Rocket lose her strap. She's just been too dominate, but The Messenger is a great representation for your IFC. I expect Rocky to fail in his attempt to obtain gold. Awesome! Vincitor is crashing... literally! (He needs his fix ASAP!) Great action all around, and I like your notes with each fight. You inspire me to make my IFC come alive like this great fed.
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Post by Eliath on Sept 12, 2015 20:57:39 GMT -6
Outside Box Office Arena, Vincitor drives his Dealer backwards into the rock wall.
Vincitor: "You screwed me Jimmy. You cheated me."
Jimmy the Dealer: "I swear I didn't. Only the best for you."
Vincitor: "Then why did it not work Jimmy?!"
Jimmy the Dealer: "You've built a tolerance - that's all."
Vincitor: "A tolerance? Don't lie to me Jimmy. I'll break both your legs."
Jimmy the Dealer: "I swear. Take two next time it should work."
Vincitor: "If it doesn't Jimmy, then I will find you and ruin you."
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Post by Dustin on Sept 12, 2015 21:20:21 GMT -6
Damn, Vincitor is going to need rehab next season!
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Post by Eliath on Sept 13, 2015 12:30:24 GMT -6
#008 - STALWARTPRELIMINARIES Before Tick Tock makes his way out to the cage, a shadowy figure blocks his path with a staff crackling with energy.Man: "Your time has come. Do you understand?" Tick Tick nods and the man removes the staff from blocking his way.TICK TOCK def. SQUATCH with THUMB TRAP:: Tick Tock avoided every strike from Squatch and then forced the tap with THUMB TRAP. NOTES: The downward slide for Squatch continues – the only winless competitor in the IFC. EL PIKADOR def. PARTY PIRATE with BOLT STRIKE ALPHA:: Pirate opened with a Jolly Roger Roll – Power Play saved Pikador. The feisty Pikador lost every scramble for control, except for the last one – BOLT STRIKE ALPHA out of nowhere gave Pikador the win. NOTES: The younger fans are starting to get behind Pikador – will their support push him towards greatness. In the locker room, you see Vincitor double dose, get to his feet and warm up, then crumple to the floor. It takes several moments for Vincitor to struggle back to his feet and make his way to the cage for his fight. The entire way, Vincitor appears to be in intense pain.TIKI BOOM def. VINCITOR with BOOM SHAKA-LAKA:: Tiki Boom dominated the physically broken Vincitor very quickly with BOOM SHAKA-LAKA. NOTES: Vincitor is broken, and may not recover – in the span of two weeks, Vincitor has crumbled. BOBCAT JACK def. WARHAWK with SUPERMAN PUNCH:: Jack opened with a vicious SUPERMAN PUNCH – Power Play saved Warhawk. Another SUPERMAN PUNCH – again Power Play saved Warhawk! Jack stuck to what was working – the third SUPERMAN PUNCH put Warhawk’s lights out. NOTES: It was tough watching Warhawk walk into the SUPERMAN PUNCH three consecutive times. Warhawk was carted into the back on a stretcher. MAIN CARDHONEST ABE def. DEATH STAR with Ax Handle Smash :: Abe struck first with Fast Forward, but it had not effect. Death Star responded with two DEATH MARCHES, but Power Play saved Abe both times. The final scramble saw Abe in control and smashing Death Star with an Ax Handle Smash to get the win. NOTES: This good fight could have gone either way. Abe showed intestinal fortitude and fought back strong. Death Star offered his hand to Abe after the fight and then “psyched” him out and left laughing. YOKO-OHNO def. KEN PO with BONZAI SPLASH:: Yoko dominated Ken and crushed him just like Warhawk on the last card with a Belly-to-Belly Slam followed by a BONZAI SPLASH for the win. NOTES: This loss derails Ken Po’s chance at a title shot, while positioning Yoko-Ohno to contend for a title shot next show. RABBID def. PUNK A.D. with SPINE SMASHER:: Punk absolutely dominated Rabbid (6 POP escapes), but a late reversal led to a SPINE SMASHER and a surprising victory for Rabbid. NOTES: Punk was heart-broken after this loss. Punk had this fight in the bag, but never went for the finish. Rabbid bided his time and struck – dropping Punk to the mat. In a gym, working a heavy bag with huge shots is a bald-headed, dark skinned fighter.
Fighter: "Very soon, everyone will know the name Hollywood Gunn." Gunn punctuates his name with a furious flurry on the heavy bag.KRUSHER KHAN def. ROCKY with Spinning Backfist (*****):: This fight was back and forth and brought the crowd to their feet within the first minute. Rocky hit a SUPER COMBO KO – Power Play saved the day. Khan (6 POP escapes) responded with a SOVIET SICKLE – Power Play saved the day again! Rocky (8 POP escapes) walked right into a nasty Spinning Backfist and was out cold. NOTES: Easily, this was the Fight of the Night. The loss does not affect Rocky’s title shot on the next card, and sets up a probable #1 Contender Fight between Krusher Khan and Yoko-Ohno. MAIN EVENT INTERGALACTIC TITLE FIGHTHype MacLeod in the cage for introductions..."It is time for the Main Event of the evening." "Five rounds for the I.F.C. Intergalactic Title." "Introducing first, fighting out the red corner; she stands 5'8" tall, and weighed in at 170 lbs. fighting out of The Borderlands, here she is, the former IFC Intergalactic Champion, – RATCHET! "Her opponent, fighting out of the blue corner; he stands 6'3" tall, and weighed in at 285 lbs. fighting out of The Second Realm, the reigning, defending, undisputed champion of the galaxy, - THE MESSENGER! ROUND 1 - FIGHT!
:: The Messenger opened up with LAST RITES, Ratchet took the shot and landed a WRIST ROCKET in response. Messenger pressed forward and a scramble for control ensued – LAST RITES stuck again and Ratchet was down for the count. THE MESSENGER © def. RATCHET with LAST RITES (ROUND 1)WINNER AND STILL CHAMPION – THE MESSENGER!
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Post by Dustin on Sept 13, 2015 13:11:08 GMT -6
Another solid show. Great story telling. I wonder what Tick Tock has going on? I can't help but feel sorry for Vincitor and Squatch. The Messenger is a great champion, even though his opponent is one of my favorite characters in the game. I wonder what Krusher thinks after beating the #1 contender? I'll be patiently waiting for the next installment.
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Post by Eliath on Sept 13, 2015 13:54:33 GMT -6
Thank you sir for reading and responding. I really value your feedback.
It's good that you feel sorry for Vincitor (that means I'm doing a good job of telling his story). Squatch I can't really explain. The initial loss to Ratchet must have really messed him up bad.
Krusher will not be happy at beating Rocky, but being required to beat another fighter for another title shot - perhaps the powers that be are "against him being the champion because he's a Communist."
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Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2015 19:32:22 GMT -6
Great set of shows Eliath. Your IFC just keeps getting better and better. A remarkable job on the stories.
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Post by Eliath on Sept 15, 2015 19:46:54 GMT -6
Great set of shows Eliath. Your IFC just keeps getting better and better. A remarkable job on the stories. Thank you for the reply and kind words! Glad you liked the shows.
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Post by Eliath on Sept 16, 2015 12:20:28 GMT -6
#009 - RIGHTEOUSPRELIMINARIESSQUATCH def. PARTY PIRATE with Fast Forward:: Squatch obliterated a drunken Pirate with Fast Forward. NOTES: If you blinked, you just missed it. Squatch gets his first win in TITANIC fashion. TICK TOCK def. VINCITOR with Right Cross :: Tick Tock crashed into Vincitor and put him on the mat with a Right Cross. NOTES: Vincitor is broken, and may not win another fight for the rest of the year. All that remains is a broken shell of a fighter with zero killer instinct. EL PIKADOR def. WARHAWK with Thunderbolt Slam :: Warhawk smacked Pikador around, but the luchador bounced right back with a Thunderbolt Slam for the win. NOTES: Pikador will contend for a title on the next card. TIKI BOOM def. BOBCAT JACK with BOOM SHAKA-LAKA (*****) (FOTY):: Tiki (9 POP escapes) & Jack (7 POP escapes) went toe-to-toe in what may be the FIGHT OF THE YEAR. This incredible back and forth war saw both men swing for the fences and connect repeatedly. Just past the 20-minute mark, Tiki finally put Jack down for the count with BOOM SHAKA-LAKA. The crowd awarded both fighters with a standing ovation in appreciation for their performances. NOTES: WOW. MAIN CARDKEN PO def. DEATH STAR with RYUKEN:: Right on the heels of the last fight, Death Star got a fast start with several DEATH MARCHES, but Ken took the shots and waited for an opening. When the opening came during a scramble, Ken hit RYUKEN for the win. Death Star went from expecting to win, to stunning defeat in seconds. Great fight! NOTES: Every time I want to push Death Star, his progress is derailed and he goes back to the drawing board. Bad luck follows this fighter. PUNK A.D. def. HONEST ABE with SONIC BOOM KICK (*****):: This was a tale of two fights. Abe dominated Punk (7 POP escapes) with a bare knuckle beatdown mixed with LINCOLN LOCKS. Punk exploded with a Future Fist Smash & completely reversed the tide on Abe (5 POP escapes) with a SONIC BOOM KICK. NOTES: A fantastic match that really told a story. Nothing resembling the Tiki - Jack fight earlier, but definitely a memorable fight. RATCHET def. RABBID with WRIST ROCKET:: Back to business as usual for Ratchet. Rabbid went for a thrust kick, Ratchet slipped it & knocked the mecha beast out with WRIST ROCKET. NOTES: Guess who's back...back again...Ratchet's back...tell your friends. #1 CONTENDER FIGHTKRUSHER KHAN def. YOKO-OHNO with SOVIET SICKLE:: Yoko tossed Khan around the cage and hit 3 BONSAI SPLASHES, Khan stunned Yoko with a Spinning Backfist & finished him with a SOVIET SICKLE. Khan is ready to fight for the belt! NOTES: Khan is focused on one thing - claiming the title. He has peaked at the right time, but can he capture the title in his second attempt? MAIN EVENT INTERGALACTIC TITLE FIGHTHype MacLeod in the cage for introductions..."It is time for the Main Event of the evening." "Five rounds for the I.F.C. Intergalactic Title." "Introducing first, fighting out the red corner; he stands 5'9" tall, and weighed in at 215 lbs. fighting out of Andromeda, here he is, the Andromedan Stallion, – ROCKY! "His opponent, fighting out of the blue corner; he stands 6'3" tall, and weighed in at 285 lbs. fighting out of The Second Realm, the reigning, defending, undisputed champion of the galaxy, - THE MESSENGER! ROUND 1 - FIGHT!:: Much of the opening round went back & forth. Messenger blasted Rocky with a Head Kick and moved in for a Darth Choke, but Rocko nailed him coming in with a SUPER COMBO KO. Rocky missed a Windmill Punch & another Head Kick set up the finish with LAST RITES with 6 seconds (1 move) remaining in the round. THE MESSENGER © def. ROCKY with LAST RITES (ROUND 1)WINNER AND STILL CHAMPION – THE MESSENGER!
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Post by pikemojo on Sept 16, 2015 13:19:16 GMT -6
I really enjoy your results, man! Great job! I was wondering, though, how do you do rounds in your fights? Is it a certain number of rolls of the dice? If a fight doesn't end by the end of the last round, do you have a way of determining the judges decision?
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